The ones directly at the the bottom looks so bland and lifeless that I have to delay posting it for a day. I didn't know what was lacking and just don't know what I was doing.
At this point I'm still trying to find that spark of life in a portrait. I did like a ton of readjustments on this adding more and more darkness trying to widened that range of values. And this is what I came up with. You'll be the judge.